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old man River

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old man River didn’t like the idea of dying,
not one the tiniest bit.
and he tried and tried with all he had,
to find some escape, some freedom.

But fear’s too strong when it comes to that.
We all call death. It can make grown men cry,
and mothers throw their kids the quicker route to hell

so this old man River decided he’d rather die on his
own terms, so he ate his apple a day. Fresh, picked.

They say an old red apple fell on old man River’s head.
Killed him dead, they said.
An old wives tale that no old wives tell.
This is magnificently old. I don't remember when I wrote it, but I just touched it up and decided to submit it.
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Nojo-on-the-rojo's avatar
O.o I dunno what to say but "wow"! And "I've been neglecting your gallery, forgive me, my liege!". You always have such a nice, crisp story-telling style. It's quite refreshing.